I can Haiku,
too.
Writing poetry so restricted by guidelines im finding relatively impossible :)
& yet this poetry which envelopes the essence of beautiful moments, i find so stimulating!
My first attempt ~
Fewer words say more
i couldn't finish it meaningfully Can anyone help me?
My 2 favourites from here & here
"Morning air
Tightly rolled
In her curlers"
&
"Drop by drop
Onto the old lantern
December rain"{& a beautiful video}
& a day of some sadness,
reading these stories,
& to see these dear children
Today ~
Capturing moments
So beautiful to behold,
They reside Forever
Together a light!
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I joined this haiku fest as well. Beautiful haiku choices and photo of the clouds.
ReplyDeleteThese are so lovely, Chenoa! Your photo image too makes your whole post a beautiful experience. Thanks so much for joining us! Many have been having a great time with this. It's been a fun day! So good to meet you and many from this--wonderful opportunity to meet and share. :o)
ReplyDeleteYou have written such a lovely and meaningful post. I feel sad too to see the terrible things you have highlighted but I also feel uplifted by the lanterns!
ReplyDeleteI tried to finish your first attempt-
Fewer words say more,
Silence says it all at times,
Combined with a touch.
Or
Fewer words say more,
A look, a silent touch may
Express my love now.
Anyway,
lovely to visit!
Sarah :)
fewer words say more
ReplyDeleteyour invitation a joy
this bridge of beauty
A beautiful place here, your blog with word and images that moves your heart...
What a fun poetry filled post! Beautiful image too!
ReplyDeleteYou have a gift with words Chenoa!!
ReplyDeleteEnjoy feeling your light!
xox
Constance